Too Many People know About Internet, What Is Positive And Negative Side?



Paragraph 1
Introduction
Brief explanation about internet and explanation how internet takes place nowadays.
Paragraph 2
Argument For
      ·         Internet as an information           source
      ·         Internet helps transfer data
      ·         Internet can unites the                 world
Paragraph 3
Argument Against
      ·         Internet holds the cyber               crime
      ·         Internet causes people               dependency (addiction)
      ·         Internet causes the health           problems
Paragraph 4
Conclusion
For me, I tend to focus on the prospect which can build a lot of advantages to help our daily business.


Basically, Internet or Interconnected Network is a global system which all computer networks in the world become unite. Internet was made by the process of globalization that require the global communication around the world. In order to help all business or communication become easier, internet nowadays becomes our daily need and it create the addiction of people. Instead of communication platform, internet takes place and affect our life so people realize that they can find anything only through internet access. In this essay, I will explain both the advantages and disadvantages of internet existence itself. 

First, internet can possibly access the data from a whole world. It helps people to get any kind of information so easily within the unlimited access. They can choose what they need to know and find it so fast as long as they want. This help us to improve knowledge, information and current news either from national or international sources. After access the data, internet helps us to transfer data by online channel such as when we want to watch the culture from other country, or when we have to share our culture then it can be seen by other country. Internet take a role to decrease the differences, which means help us to learn the diversity and build relationship with people around the world. Communication is definitely needed to unite the world yet it can support only by the internet accessibility. 

Instead of those three advantages, internet also has some damage that can causes the negativity such are hold the cyber-crime, addiction and health-problems. Cyber-crime, a criminal activity that appears within the computer or networks. It created by those who expert on Information Technology through hacking, cracking, illegal contents, data forgery, and even data theft. Internet brings lot of facilities that help our life; communication, technology, entertainer, and education. It leads into the increases level of people addiction. Since internet provides everything, people tend to think that as long as internet exist, their life will keep getting easy so they don’t mind to spend their time to explore the internet. Someone can lay in bed with laptop above his leg and low-light in room hours by hours which can automatically impact his health including eyes and bones health. His eyes can get tired and need break time from computer so he has to take a rest and stop standing in front of computer.
 
In my opinion, actually I prefer to focus on the good one with all advantages appear yet keep do not exaggerate in form of internet uses. The advantages can help my daily business either for communication or education, my business become easier and I can learn more everyday.

Komentar

  1. its such a great blog, and the bloggers give the explanation really well

    BalasHapus
  2. It's nice explanation. And I can't find your mistake too.

    BalasHapus
  3. Such a nice essay. And it's already more than 300 words

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  4. great essay i don't find any mstake, but i think it's already more than 300 words

    BalasHapus
  5. I like your essay, but it is better to make your conclusion before you write your opinion

    BalasHapus
  6. Maybe in last paragraph there is conclusion

    BalasHapus
  7. this one is good but can you add maybe some advice to the parent who have a child and already give him or her a phone to make him/her not addicted to the Internet.

    BalasHapus
  8. Since its already more than 300 words I think theres no mistakes anymore

    BalasHapus
  9. I think the title will be better if you use 'So many people' instead of 'Too many people'. Anyway, I think it's a good essay

    BalasHapus

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